Accutually, you draw pretty well...
you seem to be stuck on the "symbol" problem every starting artist has after 9 years old. I reccommend buying(with torrent) "drawing with the right side of the brain."
I found the "draw upside down picture" works best for practice.

me, and if you can make this ugly mug look good, I'll be impressed...
I suppose you could call this abstract art XP