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Title: DraYz gone soft! :@
Description: Haha, what a pussy...


dray - March 4, 2007 11:52 PM (GMT)
>.>

I write poems!

Not something you'd expect from someone like me?

Wrote it for my girlfriend who loved it!

:D

First poem ever! Maybe because she was my inspiration, that must have given me a boost.

>.>



For You.

Love is prodIgious...
Love is indescribabaLe...
Love is the essence of twO souls...one
LoVe is meritorious...
Love is mE wanting you...
More than anything in the world.

It's a feeLing,
which I get from seeing YOU.


It's an expression,
which can be hard to show.

You might think at times that I'm mad.
Mad. Yes.
Over you.

I can show you love,
in ways which will make you blush.

But there is one kind of love I cannot show you...
True Love.

This is something that has to be experienced.
Once experienced, You will know how powerful my love...

is for you.

Thus Spoke Tim - March 5, 2007 01:04 AM (GMT)
GHEY BOI!

Sythe - March 5, 2007 06:08 PM (GMT)
I hate to burst your bubble, but it's not very good <.<
I'll give you credit as it was your first poem then.

BadPixel - March 5, 2007 06:28 PM (GMT)
not to jump in for dray (he dosnt need jumping in for) but it was his first. i bet hamlet wasnt shakespeares first attempt.
BUT i cant say i like poetry anyway so im not really one to ask.
i like haikus though.

BlindTaleTeller - March 6, 2007 04:11 AM (GMT)
yeah it's not the best, but's still better than a lot of my older shit lol

LilBitEvil - March 25, 2007 10:03 PM (GMT)
dray found a girlfriend.




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