yeah, Jack is kinda evilish, isnt he? but as long as it's to Pete, I'm good. Nicely done!!!

There'll be more chapters up shortly, but if you wanna read them elsewhere

http://www.fanfiction.net/~suekay04

At ff.net it's up to chapter 12!

Thanks!

yay!!! i reads now.

The rest of the written chapters are up here now...I'll get round to writing more eventually!