Nice little story, what there is so far!
I love your nicknames (Mercedes-head, Potatohead - which is surprisingly accurate) and you have a nice grasp of the characters and their interactions.
Very well done! I can't wait to see the remaining parts...because there will be parts for the rest of the episode, right? I can ony imagine what Sam would think when Daniel re-appears! :D *snickers*

Thank you!

There will be more parts to the story, but I'm suffering MAJOR writer's block just now!

i have to add, good job!

:D

I'm really happy now...THANK YOU!

Sue, this is awesome. One of the best missing scene stories I've read. I like when I can actually see the characters doing/saying what's in the story, and that doesn't happen often. You did a graet job. Definately deserves a nomination for an award. Hope to see more soon.