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Title: The Perfect Member
Description: tentative name at best...


seanait - April 7, 2005 01:40 AM (GMT)
anyway, i come up with the weirdst idea one day (in the shower, lol), gah, its kinda hard to explain (sorta) but lemme give you the profiles

PROFILE:

Name: Koski, Jona Lynn
Rank: Captain
DOB: 2/29/68
Sex: Female
Attributes: Red hair, fair skin, multi-colored eyes, 5'9", sturdy, determined, strong minded
Branch: Air Force
Base of Operations: Cheyenne Mt. Complex, CO
CO: Colonel Jonathan "Jack" O'Neill, Major General George Hammond
Medical History: Having breast cancer at the age of 22 (1990), the patient had to have her breasts removed

PROFILE 2:

Name: Koski, Jona David
Rank: Captain
DOB: 2/29/68
Sex: Male
Attributes: Red hair, fair skin, multi-colored eyes, 5'9", sturdy, determined, strong minded
Branch: Air Force
Base of Operations: Cheyenne Mt. Complex, CO
CO: Colonel Jonathan "Jack" O'Neill, Major General George Hammond
Medical History: Having breast cancer at the age of 22 (1990), the patient has a large scar on the chest.

As you can probably tell, they are the same person, but the one the world knows about is Jona David Koski, the male, because Jona as a young girl had breast cancer, as you see, so she pretends she's a boy... the team finds out eventually, but it was an idea - what would they do with her/him?



And yes, guys can have breast cancer.

Mara Jade - April 7, 2005 07:39 PM (GMT)
Definately an interesting idea... although i've rarely seen someone described as 'sturdy' before! :P Write it! :D

seanait - April 9, 2005 02:52 PM (GMT)
yeah... i couldnt think of the other word, you know, not fragile looking but _______

Mara Jade - April 9, 2005 08:22 PM (GMT)
Lol. Niether can I...

seanait - April 11, 2005 10:19 PM (GMT)
Question:

Got any better names for the story?

Mara Jade - April 16, 2005 08:26 AM (GMT)
Uhm...no, not really. Will be easier once i've read it ;) I'll have a think though.




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