BRILLUIANT!

Keep up the awesome work!!!!!!

I'll say hi to the voices I know

Hi QOS!
Hi MNH!
Hi Mrs Scooby :P

I think you are off to a great start! You set the scene up really well, along with Sam's emotions! I like the fact that Sam took the first step in returning to his house, and Jack took the first step in admitting his feelings out loud. I can't wait to see where you take this story.

i hope u finish this , i love it , u have a nack for drawing the reader in and u do sam so well . brilliant