Name: Alcemy Odoren
Age: 22

Appearance: Alcemy is slim but masculine. He has tanned skin. His hair is black with streaks of dark blue. He wears lightweight, golden armour. Under his armour on his left arm he has a tattoo of flame like strips and also on half of his chest. He also has scars running down his back from a vigorous fight and protecting his mother.

Height: 5'9
Weight: 125lbs


Personality: Alcemy's personality is he doesn’t like to talk to anyone. It’s hard to get him to get along with others. He has trouble trusting others. He also hates people who are assassins. He talks with his sword. Hardly ever speaks.

History: As he was child Alcemy always spent his time with his mother and the surrounding neighbourhood. He ran chores for his mother gave help when needed. He was a cheerful child. He loved his mother dearly. He never met his father; the only thing he knows is that he abandoned him and his mother.

After years passed many travellers started to visit his mother, wondering why he would spy on their conversation. All he would learn was that they were soldiers from a far of land. They only talked about their king and how a wise old dark man was manipulating him. The mother would always reply with "I’m sorry, but I can’t help." With that the soldiers would leave.

Soon after he heard about that he grew interested as the months past another soldier came, but he wore different armour. He went to see what he would talk about. As they entered the room the man and his mother he heard the soldier say,”Alcemy's father is searching for him?" Then Alcemy's mother replied with “how is that possible I made sure he was dead, how did he survive?" The man said “what about the boy?" In reply the mother said "dont worry ill make up stories and take him somewhere to hide him until his dark power arises.” She then said, “Could you believe he really thinks I am his mother even though we don’t even look alike, hahahahah!"

Once hearing this Alcemy grew angry. At that moment he unleashed some of his dark power. He became possessed by some evil spirit he then started to kill every one in his village then finally he killed his false mother and burning the village down. After getting control of himself he ran away searching for his father. All he knew was that he bared a scar on his left eye.

Unique Traits: Can become possessed by a dark spirit. He also has unique sword called a keyblade he is the only on that can wield it.

Weaponry: the master keyblade.

Inventory: his keyblade and a light stone.

Geez, another keyblade? XD Can't you just use original weapons?
Spell Check'd in Microsoft word to make it more legible too. :)

Name: Alcemy Odoren
Age: 22

Appearance: Alcemy is slim but masculine. He has tanned skin. His hair is black with streaks of dark blue. He wears lightweight, golden armor. Under his armor on his left arm he has a tattoo of flame like strips and also on half of his chest. He also has scars running down his back from a vigorous fight and protecting his mother.

Height: 5'9
Weight: 125lbs


Personality: Alcemy's personality is he doesn’t like to talk to anyone. It’s hard to get him to get along with others. He has trouble trusting others. He also hates people who are assassins. He talks with his sword. Hardly ever speaks.

History: As he was child Alcemy always spent his time with his mother and the surrounding neighborhood. He ran chores for his mother gave help when needed. He was a cheerful child. He loved his mother dearly. He never met his father; the only thing he knows is that he abandoned him and his mother.

After years passed many travelers started to visit his mother, wondering why he would spy on their conversation. All he would learn was that they were soldiers from a far of land. They only talked about their king and how a wise old dark man was manipulating him. The mother would always reply with "I’m sorry, but I can’t help." With that the soldiers would leave.

Soon after he heard about that he grew interested as the months past another soldier came, but he wore different armor. He went to see what he would talk about. As they entered the room the man and his mother he heard the soldier say,”Alcemy's father is searching for him?" Then Alcemy's mother replied with “how is that possible I made sure he was dead, how did he survive?" The man said “what about the boy?" In reply the mother said "don’t worry ill make up stories and take him somewhere to hide him until his dark power arises.” She then said, “Could you believe he really thinks I am his mother even though we don’t even look alike, hahahahah!"

Once hearing this Alcemy grew angry. At that moment he unleashed some of his dark power. He became possessed by some evil spirit he then started to kill every one in his village then finally he killed his false mother and burning the village down. After getting control of himself he ran away searching for his father. All he knew was that he bared a scar on his left eye.

Unique Traits: Can become possessed by a dark spirit. He also has unique sword that only he on that can wield.

Weaponry: two handed great sword
Inventory: his great sword and a light stone.

Dude, what I'm saying is you need an original weapon.
Keyblades and all that are just plagarism of Kingdom Hearts. D:

there then i have just modified the last one

Nope. No unemotional, silent characters. Makes the Roleplay boring if we have supar powerful assassins running around with no emotion, it makes for little character interaction in the roleplay. D: