Setting:Dragon City
Time:Noon
Day:Saturday
Format:Script

Artha:There is nothing much to do today.Why do weekends have to be this boring?
Beau:Roar?(meaning:I don't know?Why ask me?)
Lance:Artha!Hey Artha!
Artha:Lance?What is it?
Lance:Two new riders are said to have arrived here in Mid-City(The Middle level of Dragon City)
Artha:There's nothing new about that.
Lance:Don't be surprised....
Artha:What is it?
Lance:Their dragons look like Beau!
Artha:What?
Beau:Roar?(meaning:Come again?)
Parmon:What Lance is saying is true.Maybe.....Beau's not hte only gold dragon left...
Artha:Hmm....Maybe we should investigate this.Let's go Beau.
Beau:Rooaar!(meaning:Let's go.)

Location:Somewhere near the All-City Racetrack

Artha:(spots the two riders and their dragons)Could that be them?What do you think,boy?
Beau:(Nods)
Artha:Those dragons do look like you,Beau..only they have a different colors.One is red..and the other is yellow.
Beau:Grrrr....?(meaning:Could they be brothers?)
Artha:(approaches the two riders and their dragons)Hello.We haven't seen you around before.Who are you guys?
Hayate(the rider riding on the red dragon):Uh...You first.
Artha:My name's Artha Tannis Penn.This here's Beaucephalis but you could just call him Beau for short.
Hayate(the rider riding on the red dragon):Pleased to meet you.My name is Hayate Sasaki.This here is Fireshadow,but we call him Fire-kun as a nickname.
Fireshadow:Roar...(meaning:Pleased to make your aquaintance)
Sora(the rider riding on a yellow dragon):And my name is Sora Konoe.This here is Stormfury.We give him Storm-kun as a nickname.
Stormfury:Roar...(meaning:Pleased to meet you.)

*Artha noticed that these two riders have pendants with amulets that very much look like his gold star amulet(Hayate has a gold amulet with a red fire on the center and Sora's amulet is a gold star with a dark blue lightning on the center.Artha has doubts....*

Artha:Hey....You two have amulets....
Hayate:What?Oh...You mean this?
Artha:Yeah.
Beau:(stares at the amulets)Roar?(confused)
Fireshadow:Grrr...(meaning:What are you starin' at?)
Beau:Grooaar!(meaning:Those amulets.What else?)
Stormfury:GrooaaaarI(meaning:Stop it.You're making us look stupid!)
Beau:Grooaar....Groaar....(meaning:You're dragons of legend.....aren't you....?)
*meanwhile*
Artha:You guys are boosters....aren't you.....?
Sora:W-What?What are you talking about?Huh?
Artha:Come on.You can't hide the truth forever.Come on!Spill!
Hayate:Okay.Okay.You win.
Artha:I'm a booster too.The Dragon Booster.
Hayate:Oh.I'm the Shadowflare Booster.
Sora:And I'm the Darkstorm Booster.
Hayate:How cool is that.Gehehehehe.
Sora:By the way...Our dragons are also legendary.
Parmon:(Suddenly bursts out of hiding)Just as I suspected!
Lance:What did I tell you Artha.
Artha:So..Where did you two come from?
Hayate:It's a long story.Take us to your place and we will tell you.

End for now...



Just who is Hayate,Fireshadow,Sora,and Stormfury?Where do they come from?
Find out next time..... :bblast: :gblast: :grip: :flare: :eye: :order: :eep: :mellow: :cookie: :poof:

Nice work. Keep it up.

Thanks!Y'know....I'm also making a manga graphic novel based on dragon booster.The two guys and their dragons are the main characters.I guess you'll see Fireshadow and Stormfury both in that manga and here in this forum.....hehehehehe.....I'm kind of an amateur manga cartoonist really....I'm just a third year highschool student. :D :bblast: :gblast:

Ooh... I love it! :wub:

Advice fro your next chapter, try to describe them instead of them just talking. It makes it more interesting when you can imagine it. You should put dialog in it too, just don't do the whole entire story as a dialog. (I'm not a writer, I mostly read but I do write other stories.)

So far so good! ;) Keep it up!

Interesting beginning. :) But don't forget to put in the Fanfic Header, as it's mandatory.

I agree. I'd like to see a little more development too. I like your beginning though. I love the dialog between the dragons (grin)! I'd love to see the manga you do.