I decided to fix the beginning... and to have more of a story to it.

Here is the beginning to it

The Story Of Banshun's Life

Prologue
A mother dragon was grooming her male dragon pup..... suddenly a beeper went off on her saddle.... she knew her rider would be here soon.... and find out that she had a pup. She got up... the pup looked at his mother as she ran off...... several days passed... and he did not see his mother..... he went and tried to follow her.... but got lost. He walked around..... and saw 2 dragons... he ran up to them... and saw they were had weird colors on them... ‘Waiths..... mommy told me to avoid them....’ He thought... and the wraiths spot him... he ran and they chased. One of them slashed at the pup.... slashing his hip.... he howled in pain and saw an alley... and ran into it. He hid in the darkness.... the wraiths searched but could not find him. They left the pup and went on to hunt another prey. He saw a garbage can on its side. He began searching through it.... his draconium was black.... he was starving and trying to find food.... He found a half eaten Draconium yum bar and ate it. He began to walk away from the garbage. After taking few steps he whined in pain and puked the food out.. amongst the puke was his own blood. His vision became blurry. He whined very loudly and fell to his side.

Chapter one
The pup is saved

A human was walking around. His name is Alex. He has been walking around for a few hrs now. He was searching for something... but he didn’t know what he was searching for. He kept on walking then he heard a loud whine come from the alley. He ran into it and found a black draconium pup on his side. The pup was dying and had slash wounds on his hips that were infected. Alex picked him up and ran off to the hospital with him in his arms.

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The pup felt like he was disappearing... "I... need... hel..." He weakly said.. his vision was blurry... he looked up and saw a human coming to him..... he blacked out for a second... and then he felt movement with his body..... 'Am.... am I dead....?' He thought 'No..... so... someone... is carrying... me...' He thought as he opened his eyes weakly to see a human face. His vision was blurry. 'd....d...daddy?' He slept into darkness.

The poor dragon pup. Please bring on the next chapter. I am feeling sorry for the poor, young dragon.

Oooh...

So this is how Alex got Banshun right? From your other fanfic, Db: The Return of the Anciet Evil.

*Gasp* my 100th post! :dance:

Cool story! I know you're putting the pauses (.....) infor effect, but could you do that less? It just makes it a little harder to read.

well the pauses are there for a reason. I need to place them there when theres nothing else that can go there. Also the other chapters are on a different section... its obvious that you guys haven't seen it. So I shall place the other chapters as well :) and to answer your question artha_penn1995 yes it is. Its Banshuns life before that story. Its of his origin

Chapter 2
Banshun

The pup woke up. He noticed a needle like tube with blood flowing through it went connected between both him and the human, this human was giving him blood. He then slept back into the darkness. When he awoke again the tubes where gone and food was laid out for him. But the human did not move. He ate the food really fast because he was starving. He then jumped off the bed and fell with a thud he yelped when he hit the ground. A nurse came to him picked him up. He thrashed in the hands of the human nurse. He wanted to get to the human who helped him. She then placed him on the bed and said. "Its ok... he will be fine. You should not move.... or your wounds will reopen." The nurse said as she left. The pup looked at his hip and saw bandages on them and stitches. He looked at the other human with worry. He then curled up and fell into a restless sleep.

The next morning he woke up and saw the human was gone. He began to whine and yelp in fear. Then the human who had saved him came through the door. He was alright. The pups eyes gleamed with happiness to see his saviour still alive. Alex walked and sat beside him. "You... ok?" He asked The pup smiled and nodded his head. "Do you have any family?" Alex asked the pup looked away with tears in his eyes. Alex gently picked him up. His face met with the pups face. The pup licked Alex's face. Alex smiled. "Want to live with me?" He asked. The pups eye gleamed his whole face shinned with happiness. He was nodding his head up and down like mad. Alex laughed. He began to tickle the pup who began to giggle. Alex then stopped. "Now we need to name you..... how about.... matthew?" The pup shook his head. "Ok...... how about.... Dave?" The pup just gave an akward look. "hm..... I got it! How about Banshun?" The pups face lit up and he nodded up and down. "Ok thats it! Your name will be Banshun!" Alex said. Banshun licked Alex's face and rubbed against his neck.

Chapter 3
Coershun and Decepshun

Banshun was on top of Alex's lap. His purring was very loud. Soon 2 dragons came in one was a female black draconium dragon.... the other was a male black draconium dragon. They closed the door quickly and made sure no one was watching. It was Decepshun and Coershun. "Ummm......" Coershun was beginning to say but noticed that the pup was staring right at him and Decepshun. "Can I see that pup?" Decepshun asked. Alex was cautious but Banshun was wanting to met them.

Alex picked up Banshun slowly and placed him on the ground very gently. Banshun woppled a bit back and forth. Alex helped him stand straight up. He walked over to Decepshun and Coershun. Decepshun looked at him closely. She then smiled. "He looks just like you...." She said to Coershun. "Yea.... I see that.. his body is like your's." Coershun said. "Could this be our baby?" Decepshun asked "He has got to be.... no other dragon can look like us..... and have the same markings" Coershun said to Decepshun. Decepshun then lowered her head do to Banshun's he walked back a bit.

"Do you know who we are?" Decepshun asked Banshun shook his head. "We are your mother and father." Decepshun said. Banshun looked at them puzzled. Then suddenly his face lit up with happiness. "m...Mom? ..d...dad?" He said looking at both of them. They both nodded their heads. A tear dropped from Banshun's eye. "MOM! DAD!" He said as he hugged Decepshun and Coershun. He was crying now. "Can I live with you?" Banshun asked. Decepshun looked at Coershun. Coershun shook his head. "Why not?" Banshun asked. "Because of my rider..." Decepshun said but was interupted by Alex.

"Moordryd Paynns dragon. You are Decepshun..... and you..." He said looking at Coershun. "You are Moordryd's Paynns friends dragon.. you are Coershun... Cains dragon." They both nodded. "You both are his parents aren't you?" They nodded again.

A tear dropped from Alex's eye "WHY DID YOU ABANDON BANSHUN?!" Alex exclaimed Banshun was surprised by this out burst. "BANSHUN WOULD HAVE BEEN DEAD TODAY IF IT WASN'T FOR ME!! AND YOU CALL YOUR SELFS PARENTS!!" Alex said tears were coming out of his eyes. Coershun had tears coming out of his eyes "WE HAD NO CHOICE KID! IF WE LEFT HIM, WORD AND MOORDRYD WOULD HAVE USED HIM FOR EVIL!!!! WE WANTED TO PROTECT HIM!!!!" Coershun screamed "Coershun...." Decepshun said "WE DID NOT WANT TO ABANDON HIM!!! BUT WE HAD NO CHOICE!!!" Coershun yelled. "Yes, you did." Alex said "And you still do." "What?" Coershun said. Alex looked him in the eye. "You got me. I shall take care of him for you 2." Alex said.

Coershun looked at Decepshun. She nodded. "Would you?" Coershun asked "I would be glad too." Alex said Banshun was startled a bit. Alex walked up to him he started to shake his legs. Alex gentley picked him up and began to comfort him. Decepshun and Coershun noticed that Alex had a kindness unlike anything they have ever seen. His eyes showed a great gentleness and respect for life. Banshun stop and begun to purr his put his front paws on Alex's shoulder and was purring. Decepshun smiled "We will leave him in your care...." She said as she began to walk away. Alex stop them first. "A thing you should know." Alex said "What is it?" Coershun asked "My name is Alex.... and I am the last half-breed alive." Alex said as the door closed. "The last what?"


Chapter 4
Carzon

Before Alex had his manor in Sun City he had a house in Old City. That was not ruins yet... Alex had taken Banshun down to his house. Banshun was excited to see his new home. "Its not much Banshun.. but its home." Alex said as he carried Banshun through the front door. First came the kitchen the size of the kitchen was a nice medium size. Alex carried Banshun into the rec room. The rec room was a bit empty, but it had pictures on the wall. The pictures were of Alex and another dragon. Alex carried Banshun up the stairs because he was told not to let Banshun walk for a bit for awhile. There was a hallway with 4 doors. The first door way led into an area with 4 doors. It was the washroom area. The second door was a closet. The third door was a spare bedroom. And the fourth door was the master bedroom. Banshun smiled. He was going to like his new home alot.

A few hours later

Alex was cooking while Banshun layed on the sofa. "Dadda?" Banshun managed to say while he blushed.... he had never called anyone that. Alex walked up to him and rubbed his hand against the side of his face. "You can call me that if you want to." Alex said as he walked back to the stove and kept on cooking. Banshun smiled "Dadda how long have you been livwing here?" Banshun asked "For about 3 years or so why Banshun?" Alex asked "I don't know just askwing." He answered

A few miles away on a hill top.

"So... he has a new dragon living with him..... hehehehe and it is only a runt. Maybe I can scare the pup away and then kill him hehehehehahahahaha!" A sinster dark death class dragon said with an evil laugh

Another few hrs later

Banshun and Alex finished eating. Alex picked up Banshun and showed him the washrooms. He pointed out that this door was for girl dragons and the one beside it was for boy dragons. Banshun just smiled and licked Alex's face. Banshun trodded into the boy dragon washroom. Alex walked out of the washroom area. and waited for him. Banshun came out of the boy dragon washroom when he saw yellow eyes looking at him through the window. He walked up to the window and jumped out to see who it was. He landed on the ground without getting hurt. He walked alittle bit away from the house. He turned around and then noticed he was lost. He heard a roar that made him scared. He ran and ran and ran..... until he couldn't run anymore. He looked back and began to cry. He was alone again... without anyone there. He curled up and cried himself to sleep.

Back at the house.

Alex entered the washroom area and noticed the window was opened and Banshun was not around, Alex began to panic. Alex ran down the stairs and ran outside. Banshun was no where to be seen. Then he knew who did this. 'Carzon!' He thought as he ran in the direction that Banshun's foot prints went.

Banshun woke up to movement. He looked around but could see no one. He then saw the yellow eyes he saw earlier. Then a black and purple dragon with spikes on its tail appeared. "So you are the pup that half-breed is taking care of. I am going to enjoy ripping you apart." The dragon said Banshun's eye dylated as he got up and began to back away. The dragon bounced at Banshun. Banshun managed to jump away his claw scratching the dragons left eye. The dragon yelped in pain and angerly look at Banshun. He then pinned Banshun to the ground. He then began to choke him. "H..elp!" Banshun managed to get out. "No one is going to help you runt. Savour the last moments of you're life." The dragon said but was soon throwen off of Banshun. Alex had tackled him and grabbed him by the tail and threw him into the wall. Banshun coughed as he finally could get air into his lungs. Alex stood in front of Banshun. "You will not hurt my son, Carzon!" 'My son' Banshun thought as a huge smile came across his face.

"You... you pathtic half-breed.... you really think you can stop me?" Carzon said as he came out of the rubble. "Anytime and any day." Alex said the gear on Carzons back began to glow rainbow. He noticed and began to disappear into the darkness "Another time half-breed, be lucky runt that your father was here to stop me.... I will destory you one day runt ONE DAY HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!" Carzon said as he disappeared. Alex picked Banshun up who was shaking from fear. Alex began to cuddle Banshun. "Its ok Banshun I am here....." Alex said as Banshun began to cry. "Shhhhh.. Its ok..... I am here... I will always be there for you." Alex said as he began to rock him back and forth. Banshun began to stop crying. He sniffed as he fell asleep in Alex's arms.


here ya go ppls! The chapters that are in it. I have more but I will await your posts.

Alex saying, "My son." was unexpected.