Title: The True Legend Of The Dragon Booster
Description: eric, and the true gold dragon.
black and gold dragon - July 19, 2007 05:19 PM (GMT)
:*: This story tells of how Eric [my rider] and I [Iam the female version of Beau] met.
title: The legend of the dragon booster.
co-authors or betas: unknown
gener: action
summary: this tells of how eric a orphan meets a dragon who is also a orphan. when the dragon turns out to be a gold bone eric is thrust into a world of danger. he must find out this dragons past to unleash her powers. or mark shall take over and declaire war. a dragon human war.
main charaters: eric, beau, mark, the water dragon crew.
pairings: beau chooses someone to be her rider.
rating:pg
warnings: violence[not a whole lot. just a little bit.].
word count: unknown
no. of chapters:so far 1
wip.
concrit:nuetral
mary sue; unsure
disclaimer: the name beau is not mine. i am making this for enjoyment not for profit ect. reasons.
chapter 1: The second Dragon-Human War.
His blade sliced through that of a black dragon. Artha and his dragon Beau were fighting a deadly war. They had failed their duty to prevent it now Word's plan had worked. He had blasted them into a pipe that led to the Prophets were they were trapped. when they escaped they left to fight the war. But alas Kitt, Parm, Lance, and Moordryde were killed. now all that was left was Artha and Beau.
Artha: "Come on Beau. up there."
Beau: *Mags Artha and jumps onto the top of a building*. The Furox was on the building across from them.
Artha:"Now Beau!"
Beau: *Mags Artha toward the furox*.
Then as beau magged him toward the Furox he drew his long sword and stabbed the furox through the heart. there was a blinding light and the only thing left of the furox was a bonemark. Then Beau magged Artha into the saddle.
Beau and Artha: *Scream in pain.*
Word: *Is dying but manages to stab Beau in the back*. "good by Dragon Booster. Muhahaha." *Then he dies.*
Beau and Artha fall and do not move. They are dead. The war is over. They saved the world, but they failed themselves.
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Down in the Dragon temple.
Mortis:"Noooooooooo.Artha! Mark shall destroy the world. I can not take care of you Beau. You are to go to an orphanage and choose you're rider."
Beau: a female dragon stood listning to Mortis. She looked just like Beau.Then she ran off as Mortis told her to an orphanage, and was only seen at Dragon-City Orphanage. Where her destiny would unfold.
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At Dragon-City Orphanage a young boy of sixteen enters the building. He has wonderous blue eyes and black hair. His parents were killed during the war. Now he would spend his days in the orphanage. At least untill he finds his destiny. Then he shall no longer be a poor kid. But a hero. His name is Eric.
hope you like it! please reply!
desperada - July 19, 2007 05:46 PM (GMT)
that is really good, keep up the good work
black and gold dragon - July 19, 2007 05:47 PM (GMT)
hey thanks. i appriciate it.
Deathshallcome - July 19, 2007 06:02 PM (GMT)
its alittle bit sad but it is a really good story.
Burnout Beau - July 20, 2007 02:43 AM (GMT)
Interesting story, b-n-g dragon. :cookie: However, I do find it a little confusing to read especially when it comes to the action sequence. Here's a suggestion for the action sequence.
Taken from a dialogue:
| QUOTE |
| Beau: Mags Artha toward the furox. |
You can put it like this:
| QUOTE |
| Beau: *Mags Artha toward the Furox.* |
That way you can differentiate between action and speech and also makes the story more neat.
black and gold dragon - July 20, 2007 11:59 AM (GMT)
ok. thanks for that sudgustion!. here is chapter 2 you should like it is not as sad but the origannal db keeps haunting someones mind. youll see.
Chapter2: The Dragon.
After three months after the Dragon-Human War Eric was so confused. he was in an orphanage and, People kept telling him different stories. But one thing that wouldn't leave his mind was that he saw what happened. he saw the Dragon Booster and his dragon die. But why?
Sarah:"Are you always on the floor when you wake up?"*stares at him questiongly.
Eric:"Only in my dreams."
Eren:"yeah whatever. lets get breakfast. i'm starving."
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Though as they were in the orphange building they didn't see, or mind the dragons that were in the field. The orphanage took abandoned, hurt, or lost dragons. As they did like humans. they're were many dragons. and all were awake,but one. A black and gold dragon. she was having a nightmare. But why? Her dream was full of blood and screams. She couldn't take. She had to wake up. Then the breakfast bell rang[a noise that sure to wake up a dragon]. She woke and opened her wonderous black and gold eyes. Then she went to the line to the barn.The last in line.
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Eric:"hey look at that dragon!" Looks out window toward the black and gold dragon.
Sarah:"wow it looks like the real black and gold dragon. only female."
Eren: "yeah she came in today. The stable master said her name was Beau."
Eric:"i like her." Stares at Beau and sees himself riding her.
Sarah: "Keep dreaming lover boy. The stable master is giving everyone a shot tomoroww. So do go counting that she'll choose you. she may choose someone else.
Eric:"Like who?Eren never does stuff with dragons unless it's a vid game.Hahaha. And you are a female. They dont let you girls try for your safty."
Sarah:"Yeah whatever. I will show you."*Stomps off toward cafeteria.
Eren: *Shakes his head and follows Sarah*
Eric:"What did I say something wrong?"
end of chapter two. hope you like please read and reply! :*:
desperada - July 23, 2007 04:51 PM (GMT)
Thats really cool Black and gold dragon
black and gold dragon - July 24, 2007 11:56 AM (GMT)
thanks desperada. ok introducing ch. 3
chapter3: the theft of a lifetime.
After his uncle had died Mark had now taken his place. Of course he inhertited everything. The citadel, the dragon[which he really didn't like], and all the wraith gear. So after modifying the old wraith gear[he was brillantly smart] he was ready to put it to the test. His plan was to steal the originall black and gold dragon's sister. Who was now at Dragon-City Orphanage. So he set off upon his red boned beast and rode off into the night. For his gear was by far more powerfull than ever.
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The beast rode into the night bearing a rider who was coming for her. She tried to close her mind. But the young dragon could not. Her mind was open. She was vulnerable. Even when she was awake. But only till she found her rider. Then a peircing scream filed her dream. Blood and fire came to her. She saw her brother fighting. Then she saw Word Paynn. She tried to get to her brother and help but wrought iron snaklike chains crept up her legs. She was caught. She knew it. Then a voice called to her. It called her name. She followed the light for the snakes were gone. The voice was her brothers. She raced ahead then she was awoken with a start.
As she opened her eye's she had to move quickly. Fire had spread through the fields. She looked around everything was crazy.Dragons running left and right. Humans trying to get away. Then a scream. She new what to do, she jumped through the building clearing a path of escape. Young children ran out and so did three teenagers. Then as everyone escaped a red whip came up and lashed itself to beau's side. She roared as it drained her energy. And a man laughed at her bravery.
Markus:"Give it up young dragon no one can resist the red energy drain whip. No one! Muhahahhahhha."
Beau:*Gave a weak groan then collapsed. She couldn't get up. Her energy left her. She was lost in a sea of dreams again."Help! Help!" A woman screamed."Please help!. Then she relised her own voice was talking to her. "You must not give up. You have to keep trying." Then with renewed strength she lifted her head. But words were not enough.
Then a silverlike dragon that looked like her brother came to her. It was a misty substance. It said:"You must not give up. You have to keep trying." Then faded away.
Beau: *Sends a shock of gold energy up the energy drain whip which snaps it in half. Then she raced toward the exit. But heard another yell for help. she turned around and saw one of the teenage boys who had ran out.
Marcus:*Pressed a blade up to the boys throat. "Come back and no one gets hurt." He new hi plan was working. He just knew it.
Then, he was outsmarted at his own game. The dragon came back. She hit him in the head and roared. The child was realesed. But he just stood there. Then he clambered onto the back of the dragon. She reginized him at once. A brilliant gold light had emerged around her the area was blasted apart. The building's structure was blown to dust.
Marcus:* Stood watching. He could not get to her. Not without touching that burning golden light. So he jumped onto the red dragon and rode off to his citadel. He needed a better plan.*
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The light grew more bright then died down. Eric looked upon the head of the dragon. A tiny gold light flashed across the dragon's head. And a star mark exactly like the mark of the penn racing crew appeared on her head. Only there was another much smaller and deeper gold inside of that brighter one. Then the dragon roared and the mark started to glow. Upon Eric's rist a golden guantlet was placed. and around his neck, a gold starmark exactly like the bonemark upon the dragon.
Beau:"you are the true dragon booster."
thats all for now! please reply!
Deathshallcome - July 24, 2007 01:26 PM (GMT)
really good work Black and gold dragon keep it up! :D
The Hydrag - July 24, 2007 06:58 PM (GMT)
Excellent story. I havent gotten into a story like that for quite a while. Please update soon!
black and gold dragon - July 24, 2007 08:11 PM (GMT)
hey thanks their are a couple more chapters.id put more but i am currantly busy now packing.
Deathshallcome - July 26, 2007 02:55 AM (GMT)
Ok Black and Gold I only have 5 mins left so you better post your next chapter quickly before I have to go.
black and gold dragon - July 26, 2007 03:03 AM (GMT)
ok next one.
chapter4:the news and the goodbye.
Eric:"I am confused."
Beau:"Why?"
Eric:"You are a gold bone dragon? So you chose me to be your ride. Why?"
Beau:"You fullfill the legacy."
They stood at a race track gates.Beau had changed her colors to red and blue at the tent. The track flashed green and the gate went down.They rushed off.Eric screamed at the top of his lungs.
Some person:"Haha! Orphan boy."
Eric:"What? Oh really. Come on Beau."*pushes red button on saddle, which activates thrusters.*
Beau:"Eric relax and release the golden dragon in you and i shall with me."
Eric:"OK."*relaxes*
As they relaxed Beau got faster the thrusters still going she reached 600 miles per hour.
Eric:"Woohoo!"
They crossed the finish line first place. Then Eric's com link beeped.
Eric:"Huh. Sara!You are alive!"
Sara:"Yeah but Eren is dead. they couldn't find his body."
Eric:"what?"*gets out of saddle*"Go away."
Beau:"what?"
Eric:"You heard me. GO AWAY!"
Beau:"Fine."*Changes back to black and gold color. her star mark starts to glow and a amulet and guantlet fall to the ground."But i will be back."* Runs off.*
Eric :Pics up the guant and amulet and looks worried.
hope you liked it!
Alexis - July 26, 2007 03:24 AM (GMT)
black and gold dragon - July 27, 2007 12:42 PM (GMT)
i haveto revise ch.4. ch 4 revised.