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Title: Application Fics


LightningFlash - April 9, 2005 10:59 AM (GMT)
Formerly for applying to the RP.

Natalilly - April 9, 2005 12:26 PM (GMT)
I got over excited about the drabble, do forgive! :unsure:






Member name: Natalilly

Personal details (favorite character, age, tell us a little about yourself):
My favourite character is Moordryd, to NO ONE'S surprise. I'm 22, and I draw too much. I play Nintendo, and could have done on a professional level if I could have afforded the games when the 64 came in. I know a lot of weird and useless facts (Did you know: the best way to remove chalk from a chalkboard and keep it looking like it's just been painted is Coca Cola?) I have one older brother who has two children, my nephew Druid and Niece Lily. I make bright necklaces and necklaces out of weird objects, like textas, dominos and lego bricks. And my pet cat, Tish, is a parnoid schizophrenic.

Characters you’d like to play: (Note: This RP is focused on the canon characters. For OCs, see the “OC Application Form” and fill it out if necessary.)
Moordryd, Cain, Kitt, Pyrrah, Word, in that order

Previous RP experience and writing abilities:
Five years RP experiance on boards, including boards (probably long dead) Realms Beyond, Kuchinja's pride, Miles' pride, Wolf pack, The Evil Gang, the Watcher's council and most recently, Two Professors. Two Professors and Kuchinja's Pride I was Admin, Two Professors having over 700 members before it died out.
I've played both OC and Canon characters, Draco, Lucius, Snape and George Weasly being the most recent
Passable fiction writer, do both humour and serious, written fics about the Labyrinth, Yu Gi Oh, Harry potter, Lord of the Rings, Lylat Wars, Interview with the vampire, The Elenium and the Belgariad. I have Lion King as well, but unpublished.

Writing sample:
Who else am i going to write about?


Moordryd got up, wiping his top lip and looking at the faint red smear it left on his hand.
‘Fool of a boy.’ Word Paynn snapped, not even moving a finger to help the lad. ‘You will never reach a racing standard with such clumsiness…’
Moordryd said nothing, refitting his helmet on and climbing back up onto the brand new dragon his father had rather offhandedly given him, suppressing an urge to throw his helmet as hard as he could at the man who’d incidentally sired him.
Like every child from Sun City to Down City, Moordryd dreamed of being a dragon racer, and luckily for him his father also happened to have the money and unlimited supply of gears to back that dream up.
However, he thought blackly, as he settled himself into the slightly too large seat on his dragon’s neck, Word Paynn was not a man to give ANYTHING away for free, not even to his own son
‘Hyaaah!’ He urged the dragonet, who sprang into a sprint circling the bowl shaped practice ring.
Moordryd flattened out over the neck, readying the short, thick lance.
‘Now.’ Word said dispassionately. The new little Dragonet carried his rider several feet up on a mag blast to a target, which the boy took out with a swing of his lance, this time falling back on his dragon, rather then overbalancing and landing several feet away on the ground.

As the dragon sped up, the G forces of his run started running them up the curved wall, and the targets also started moving further and further up, and closer to the centre to compensate.

So it was with a feeling of fierce pride that Moordryd Paynn landed safely back on Decepshion with the pieces of the last target clattering to the polished floor.
His dragon slowed to a stop, sliding down the curved wall face. Moordryd looked hopefully up at his father, taking off his too big helmet, looking excited and flushed with pride.
‘I did it! I only messed up once! I did it on my first try!’ He cried.
‘And once is too many.’ Word said with a quelling look, his expression as fathomless as usual. Moordryd’s grin faltered. ‘Next time I expect no mistakes.’
‘But…’
‘You will practice this. I will come to observe you progress at the end of the day.’ Word said, sweeping out of the room.
Moordryd threw his helmet at the space his father had occupied.



Links to any other writing samples:
http://www.fanfiction.net/~natalilly

LightningFlash - April 9, 2005 12:32 PM (GMT)
Okay, you're in! I'll give you the password.

Just a few typos, and watch your commas. :)

Natalilly - April 9, 2005 12:35 PM (GMT)
I always typo, I type fast and look at the keyboard, so I miss lots of letters. I do the same thing when I write. Weird.
Commas I'm aware of, I know where they go, but for some reason have some form of comma deficiencey *grins* I'll edit for my own piece of mind...

Sarah Frost - April 10, 2005 01:06 AM (GMT)
Member name: Sarah Frost

Personal details (favorite character, age, tell us a little about yourself): Word, 16, likes to read, has no social life

Characters you’d like to play: Cain, Word, Reepyr, Captain Faiar, Mortis, Artha, Pyrrah

Previous RP experience and writing abilities: Some RP experience in another fandom; a few round robins in the OF; fanfiction writing. I don't regard myself as an especially talented writer, but I pride myself on my English skills and like to try to improve.

Writing sample:

Yeah, so I felt inspired. Two not-quite-drabbles. The first one’s Moordryd/Cain interaction, only slashy if you want it to be, and the second one is my take on why nobody in Dragon City seems to be aged between 20 and 40.

“That’s whom I was named after,” Moordryd said, pointing. A beam of sunlight came through the window behind him, shadowing his face and illuminating his hair, giving the appearance of a halo; he looked like an angel in one of Word’s collection of ancient paintings, Cain thought, though the conceited tones of his voice were anything but angelic.

All Cain could see was an ancient manuscript.

“That’s just an old book,” he said. “It’s not even written in our language.”

“It is the oldest extant copy of the Regnum Draconiae,” Moordryd said, sounding rather sniffy and probably quoting the words of his tutor Myrddin. “Moordryd was the man who toppled an empire, and then pissed on its ashes.”

That’s cheerful, Cain thought, but kept his opinion to himself. He usually did.

“There’s an old story about Cain, too,” Moordryd said. “Millennia old, I think, from the time before the dragons. He killed his brother and then he was doomed to wander the earth forever branded as a traitor. They called it the mark of Cain.”

Cain shrugged. It seemed the only thing to do.

Most of the Dragon Eye crew, he knew, were renegades of one sort or another, largely despised by the other crews, though that gave them a certain…freedom. They could do whatever they wanted, whenever they wanted, and because everyone knew that was what the Dragon Eyes generally did, nobody minded. Cain was marked as one of them; if that made him a traitor, then he’d wear it with pride.

“Of course, Father would have you killed if you betrayed me,” Moordryd continued.

“I don’t plan to,” Cain said softly. The Dragon Eye crew was all he had; the tattoo on his forehead served as a reminder of where he belonged. And to whom.

Moordryd had the grace to look a little ashamed of himself. “Yeah. It’s just an old story. Want to get beaten in a race again?”

He turned quickly, moving with the nervous energy born of a childish enthusiasm that not even Word Paynn had been quite able to curb, starting to run towards the stables. Cain followed him. If he wanted to he could have overtaken the other boy on foot, but he knew it would upset Moordryd.

Neither of them bothered to look back at Word Paynn’s personal collection of treasures from the past. Ancient legends meant little to two boys on a sunny day.

--

There had been a plague—the plague, the blackwind, mortis negra—that nobody ever talked about, or if they did, they did so in whispers. It had lasted nearly six years, each one of them taking a huge toll on Dragon City, leaving the citizens fearful and alone.

Word Paynn and Connor Penn were two of the few who lived to remember. Scarcely a tenth of those who had lived through the plague as adults still survived; it had been left to the young to take the place of their parents in the government of Dragon City, after the plague. It was almost just as well few lived to talk about it. The young did not need reminding of such times, and to mention a fearful name might well bring back the object of fear.

The cause had never been known. Some blamed the dragons, and heaped a huge funeral pyre with live dragons and dead humans, and in the flames there were roars and cries which did not stop for days. Word had smelled roasting meat under his only recently-built citadel, and felt momentarily hungry before he realized the true substance of the pyre.

Some blamed the inhabitants of Down City, because they were poor and dirty and did not follow rules. The young priest Mortis had thousands of refugees to deal with in the street rioting, offering shelter to all he could, hands blistered and limbs exhausted from feeding and treating as many as he could.

There was little to be done, too, for those who had it. Some took months to die, only the red markings on their bodies identifying the symptoms before they finally felt pain, coughing and spewing and rotting their way to an early death. Word Paynn calibrated his cameras and sensors carefully, to make sure that his citadel would remain uncontaminated.

Occasionally, some would recover. Connor had, back in the early days; he’d locked himself into his quarters in the temple so as not to infect anyone else, and spent days in bed, delirious and ill and helpless, before he finally realized that he had healed and could help others. Not many were so lucky.

Word had shut himself up in his citadel, relying on his gears and security and riches to protect him. The plague was harming his business, but he had more than enough money, and did not allow himself to catch the disease, trying to use his tech to help efforts to figure out some cure—out of pure self-interest, naturally.

And there were children, born in those days. Connor Penn’s wife Grainne had been with child, Artha born in the early stages of the plague and Lance in the last, and desperately worried for all their safety; she’d been near-hysterical most nights, lashing out at Connor and rebuking him for risking his life trying to help the plague victims. He’d tried to reassure her as best he could, but she hadn’t listened. She'd chosen to stay with him, but later Connor wondered if how he had treated her in those days had been part of the reason why she’d left him later on.

Priest Mortis had seen a lot of orphans, children whose parents had died of plague, leaving them nothing but immunity: Phistus, the son of a Grip crew member Mortis had once been friends with; the quiet red-haired boy with the greenish face called Reepyr, who never moved from the side of an orange dragon; Pyrrah and her brother, wild orphans left behind in one of the last stages of the plague, their loss crueler for that very reason; the blue-haired little girl who had simply disappeared one day; Wulph, one of the Army of the Dragon’s orphans, who had been taken in by that particular tight-knit group; the boy with the Dragon Eye tattoo on his face, who never said a word; children far too young for such a burden to fall on them, but only a few children out of many in identical situations.

Word Paynn’s son had been born in those days. His mother had died during the birth, the cause uncertain; but Moordryd had lived, and Word had made certain that his only son would be safe, kept in a locked room with a nurse and a tutor. Later, Word wondered if Moordryd’s early imprisonment had led him to seek out the shadows of Down City, but decided that if so then he had made a wise decision. As he normally did.

The population had been decimated by the time the plague had finally died down. Reported cases declined and then disappeared, and gradually the task of rebuilding a shattered city began. It was easier to just ignore the dead and focus on what had to be done. Some said that grey dragon-gear, made by a mysterious sect called the Mechanists and sponsored by Word Paynn had helped to end it, but nobody knew for sure.

A woman called Grainne had left her husband, in those days after the plague had ended.

"I won’t stay with you any more, Connor,” she’d said, handing him a crying Lance with an annoyed sigh. “You never paid any attention to us at home, going off at all hours to do who knows what, it’s a miracle the four of us survived…”

Connor held his son, trying to comfort him as best he could. “No. Grainne. The children need you. I need you. Please…”

“I said I was leaving.” She turned, the flounce of her skirt swishing around her. “The quarantine has been lifted, and I won’t stay shackled to two squalling brats and this hole of a place.” She gestured to the house around them.

It actually wasn’t such a bad place, compared to most in Dragon City; their home was in Mid City at least, even if it was a little small. And the four of them had lived through the plague, though Grainne had lost a brother and father.

“Grainne…” he’d began, but she had slammed the door by then.

He’d seen her leave, riding her dragon Morgan, a pack slung over her back and her dark hair flying in the wind, and he’d known she wouldn’t return as he tried to quiet Lance while Artha clung to his pants leg, tears beginning to fill his eyes…


Word and Connor had seen each other on the street, once, in the days soon after the plague had ended and most of the bodies had been burned. The old quarrel might have almost been forgotten.

“They’re expelling me,” the older boy said. “Skitting bastards. I’m glad to go.”

Connor didn’t think his friend was telling the truth with the last statement, but let it pass. “I’m sorry,” he said. Word Paynn had been his friend all the way through their period as novices. They’d drifted apart lately, but they were still each other’s closest friend. “It’s just that they think some of your ideas are dangerous…”

And they were. Word had been talking about a dragon-human war and the power that would be released there. Thanks to the manufacture of new, more powerful gears, humans would triumph and the dragons would be made their permanent slaves, and a better world would be built. Word’s ideas frightened Connor, who had been secretly working under the direction of Priest Mithras to avert these very consequences.

“They’re
wrong,” Word said. “They don’t understand my genius.”

“You could destroy the whole world!” Connor said. It was something he felt strongly about, and he couldn’t resist trying to convince his friend of the truth. “Do you know what would happen in a war?”

“There would be power, and a new empire built out of this corrupt one. Dragon City would be fashioned into something truly great. The dragons aren’t more than beasts, and they exist to be used. Anything else would be a coward’s way!” Word was clearly angry now, a pink flush creeping into his pale cheeks.

“How can you encourage a war?” Connor said sadly. “I thought I knew you, once. Cared about you.”

“Then join me,” Word said, meeting Connor’s eyes. “We’ll conquer the city together, and build an empire. We can still be partners. With your dragon-riding skills and my gears we’d be unstoppable.” His gray eyes were lit with enthusiasm and emotion, and the sheer amount of emotion he showed at that moment surprised Connor.

There was nothing more Connor wanted at that moment than to agree. He remembered the times they’d worked together, the two of them partnered on some project or other for the temple, their different skills fitting flawlessly together to succeed. They were closer than brothers, inseparable friends, and on their first day as novices they had promised to always stick together no matter what happened.

That promise was being abandoned now.

“I can’t,” Connor said quietly. “You’re wrong, and I can’t support war.”

Word’s expression suddenly seemed to shut down, and Connor knew that nothing he could say would ever make it right again. “I leave the temple in a threeday," Word said. “Until then, I will stay out of your way as much as possible. You will regret your decision someday, Connor Penn.”

He’d left then, the door closing with a quiet
click, and Connor had sat down on his bed and tried not to think about his old friend.

They had both been watching a race, on the Down City tracks; the dragonriding had just been revived, and though the participants were fewer, the enthusiasm was running as high as it could.

Connor had been the first to speak.

“I heard your wife died. I’m sorry,” he said.

He had never met Isolde Morgana; she had been a daughter of one of the richer Families, a match Word had adopted for its political necessity.

“Your condolences are accepted,” Word said. “She was one among many, in recent times. And how is Grainne?”

“She…is in Stone City,” Connor said. “I think she’s happy.”

It was a loaded question, Connor knew. She had fled to him from Word’s citadel at night, just after the earliest cases of the plague had been reported, claiming his cruelty to her as the reason to seek Connor out. Grainne had chosen to become Word’s mistress over Connor, once, before her decision had been reversed, and that had furthered the rift between the two men.

“She always was flighty to the extreme,” Word said, his tone dismissive.

Connor clenched his fists. “I never asked her what happened between you. Was it really just because you wanted to get at me?”

Word looked at him and smiled, slowly and without humour. “I will not answer that question.” He paused. “I made you an offer, before the days of plague. You see this city has been devastated, Connor Penn, and only just recovered thanks to gray draconium energy. Will you join me to rebuild it? The situation has not changed.”

Below, a dragon was struggling against being tied to a pinning block, a howl starting to fill the air.

“A war is brewing,” Word continued. “Which side will you choose?”

“The side of peace,” Connor said firmly.

The golden star-dragon had been bred, and was in his stables, a dragon who had already survived one plague. It would live to stop a war, Drakkus willing.

“Then let more days of devastation begin,” Word said. He stood, and made as if to walk away.

“The next time we meet will not be so civil,” he said, clenching a fist, the tone of his voice indicating restrained anger. “You made the wrong choice.”

He swept away, and Connor watched.

Plague and war, he thought, and noticed that most of the enthusiastic spectators of the race were children. It will be hard for them.


Links to any other writing samples: http://www.fanfiction.net/~sarahfrost

LightningFlash - April 10, 2005 01:28 AM (GMT)
*Deliberates* Hmmm. Gee. Man . . . .

Oh, alright! You're in. :P

ShadowCat - April 10, 2005 04:29 AM (GMT)
Member name: Shadowcat

Personal details: I'm 18, live in Australia and am crazy about anything science-fiction! I also like reading (on the computer or audio books since I can't read normal books much anymore). I don't really have a favourite Dragon Booster character. I like a lot of the characters.

Characters you’d like to play:
Kitt or maybe Artha. I'm not too fussy. I just don't know much about most of the characters yet.

Previous RP experience and writing abilities:
None, but I'm okay at writing. Probably not the best since I don't write much, but I'm improving!

Writing sample:
Kitt was helping Artha practice dragon racing. Artha was getting frustrated, so they had decided to take a break for a while.

"Hey, Kitt?" Artha asked. "I hope you don't mind me asking, but why are your parents never around?"

Kitt was surprised. She hadn't been expecting Artha to ask that, though she should have expected that he'd ask it sooner or later.

"I mean, I thought that they would at least come watch you race or something," Artha continued.

Kitt didn't really want to talk about it, but figured that if she didn't, it would come up some other time. It was better to get it over with.

"My parents are dead. My aunt and uncle are supposed to be looking after me," she said.

"So why aren't they?" Artha asked.

"They don't want to look after a kid. They think it's too much work or something. They come see me every now and then, and they did come watch me race once, but other than that, I really don't see them."

"Oh, I'm sorry," Artha said.

"Don't be. I'm fine on my own," Kitt answered.

Artha could understand that. He and Lance were pretty much on their own as well and they did all right.

"Well, you know we're all here if you need help," Artha said.

"Yeah, I know," Kitt answered. "But I don't think I will."

Links to any other writing samples:
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/465698/

LightningFlash - April 10, 2005 08:24 AM (GMT)
Welcome in!

I'll email you the password if we don't chat soon. :D

Natalilly - April 10, 2005 08:49 AM (GMT)
*fans self* I'm surrounded by a constelation of stars.
Sarah, what a liar! Bad fan fiction writer my foot! they were excellent! I'd love to read more of your stuff.... but it's all Ace Lighting and I know less then diddly squat about that series, was never home in time to see much.
Shadowcat, shot and simple i love snippits of conversations in fics like this, beautifully done indeed!

ShadowCat - April 11, 2005 06:34 AM (GMT)
Thanks!

LightningFlash - April 11, 2005 10:48 AM (GMT)
Did you get the password? First email from the official address. :P

hyperpsychomaniac - April 13, 2005 10:59 AM (GMT)
Yes, I've finally got around to it! Here we go...

Member name: hyperpsychomaniac

Personal details:
Lets see, I'm 18. I like writing, drawing a bit. I'm studying engineering at uni. My fave character is Parm. Go the technobabble!

Characters you’d like to play:
Parm, Cain, perhaps Lance (just cus he's cute)

Previous RP experience and writing abilities:
I've done alot of Ace Lightning fanfic on fanfiction.net, some stargate ones. A bit of round robins (quite a few unposted with my little sis) and some rp on msn.

Writing sample:
Ok, I hope that this is in character. It turned out... deeper than I meant it to be, I didn't even know what I was going to do when I started.

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Parm fiddled with the broken gear, trying to find exactly what was wrong. Artha had broken it while racing earlier that day and Parm had ended up being the one to fix it. Not that he minded, he enjoyed putting the stuff back together and Artha had to take care of Beau before going ‘downstairs’ to talk to Mortis.

A piece of the gear clattered to the floor and he bent to pick it up.

“Hey, Parm, you done fixing the gear yet?” Artha asked.

Parm started at the sound of his voice and ended up crashing his head into the table he’d been working at. “Ow!”

“Careful!” said Artha, grabbing the gear before the whole thing fell to the floor. “I do need to use this stuff, you know.”

“Well…” Parm replied, rubbing his head, “one might wonder why you broke it in the first place.”

“I didn’t break it on purpose. Besides, I thought you liked fixing that kind of stuff.”

“I wouldn’t have to if you hadn’t taken that corner so fast. Like I told you not to…”

“Relax, Parm. I didn’t take it that fast. And I only broke that one piece of gear, and you’re doing a great job fixing it.”

“Thanks… wait, don’t change the subject. You need to be careful. If you’d taken it any faster it could’ve been you trapped between Beau and the guardrail, not the gear.”

Artha rolled his eyes as he placed the broken gear back on the table. “Well, I didn’t. I’m Dragon Booster, remember? I know how to race.”

“Being Dragon Booster doesn’t mean you’re exempt from the laws of physics, Artha and your racing skills come from playing vid games.”

“And you haven’t raced at all, Parm! Look I’ll be more careful, but I’m the one out on the track. I can look after myself. If you want to help, fix the gear. That’s something you’re good at it, right?”

Parm sat back down at the table. “Yeah.”

“Well then do that, and let me be Dragon Booster.”

Artha left the room, leaving Parm to stare at the broken gear. It was funny how they relied so heavily on the gear – a dragon would be hard pressed to win a race without it. But when its rider did win they’d inevitable put it down to their skill alone, never acknowledging the mag-powered machines that had helped them there.

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and I hope that made sense...

Links to any other writing samples:
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/258594/

LightningFlash - April 13, 2005 11:07 AM (GMT)
Made sense to me! Artha relies on Parm to fix his gear. He NEEDS the gear. Wake up, Stu boy!

Welcome to the group. :D

Natalilly - April 13, 2005 11:59 AM (GMT)
Love it! Yes i thoguht it was VERY in character. I could keep their voices running in my mind tot eh dialouge, so nothing was amiss!

Sarah Frost - April 13, 2005 07:20 PM (GMT)
Very nice. It's about time Parm gets a bit of attention!

KittxArtha forever - April 25, 2005 11:17 PM (GMT)
Member name: kittxartha forever

Personal details (favorite character, age, tell us a little about yourself):
Favorite character is kitt, lance, parm, artha, and word. I’m 15 years old, I’m a loner, and I have no job.

Characters you’d like to play: kitt, word, maybe lance

Previous RP experience and writing abilities: I have rp as hinata, temari, pakkun and akamaru from naruto, rikku from final fantasy, Seem from jak3, kairi from kingdom hearts. I write fanfictions but I have never post them. I do general, humor, drama, tragedy, romance, and that’s about it.

Writing sample: i call it "lance came with a cost"

6-year-old Artha Penn sat in the waiting room of the dragon city hospital. “What’s taking so long” wined artha. Connor Penn was standing out side the delivery room. “It wont be much longer artha, then you’ll a big brother” artha father said. Artha sighed, “but why does it have to take so long!” wined artha, Connor laughed at his son. Artha stated to wonder what was the new baby going to be he was hoping for a little sister. Connor sat down next to his son. “So how does it feel that your going to be a brother?” he asked, little artha looked up at his dad “umm I don’t know” artha said staring at the floor. “It’s a big responsibility ” said Connor putting his hand on artha head. “What dose re-res… that big word you just said mean?” asked artha looking at his papa. “Responsibility means that…” Connor started to think, he really didn’t know what it would be like to be a big brother, his wife may know since she had a littler brother who was a rock star… Connor shook his head and sighed forgetting his son question.

A baby cry filled the air; a nurse walked out of the delivery room with something wraped up in a blue blanket and was crying. Artha jumped out of his chair as the nurse walked over to his daddy. The nurse smiled “it’s a healthy baby boy Mr. Penn” said the nurse. She put the baby into Connor’s arms; the baby stopped crying and looked up at his daddy. Artha pulled on the nurse’s dress “where’s mommy?” asked artha, the nurse looked down at artha and smiled “she’s resting right now” said the nurse. Connor kneeled down so artha could see his new baby brother. Artha looked at the new baby “that’s the baby?” asked artha. Connor let out a laugh “yes that’s the baby” he said, artha raised an eyebrow, “what’s his name?” asked artha staring at his brother. “Hmm” Connor thought for a moment “lance… the babies name is lance” artha looked at his dad “lance?” he said looking back at his brother. Lance looked at artha, and… giggled? Artha smiled “look daddy I made him laugh!" The nurse was shocked and told Connor that the baby is too young to laugh. Lance let out a yawn and closed his little eyes.

Artha and his dad walked into a room, which had artha mom in a bed filling out a baby book. Artha ran over to his mom jumping up and down, Connor sat at the end of the bed. Artha's mom put the baby book away and picked up artha. “Mommy, mommy!” artha said hugging her. His mother laughed; artha mother had long black hair and light blue eyes. “How you feel Samantha?” asked Connor looking at his newest son. Samantha yawned “tired… I could sleep for a week” she said hugging artha. Lance let out a cry and Connor picked him up. “Looks a lot like you Connor,” said Samantha, Connor laughed looking at lance’s orange hair. Lance put his little fist in his mouth, artha let out a laugh. Samantha looked at artha “how does it feel to be a big brother?” she asked. Artha looked at his mother again “umm I don’t know… happy?” he guessed. Both his mom and dad laughed, and lance yawned and smiled. Samantha laid back down “I feel so tried” she said, artha looked at his mom “mommy? Are you ok?” he asked looking worried. “I feel sleepy that’s all” Connor looked down, he put lance back into his baby bed and picked up artha. Samantha looked at lance “please… don’t forget me my son's” she though closing her eyes “artha… mommy’s going to go to sleep for a long time” Connor said to his son. Artha looked at his dad “why?” he asked, Connor looked away from artha “cause she… going to go some where” said Connor, artha looked back at his mommy “where?” Connor put artha on the floor “she’s going to heaven” he said, artha felt the tears come “but why!” artha yelled, he turn to his mom. Samantha put her hand on artha head “remember… artha… trust the dragon and trust your friends and remember to release the…the… dragon” her hand fell lib and her eye’s fully closed. Artha grab her hand and started to cry “mommy! Mommy wake up! Please wake up!” he cried.

Artha awoke from his dream covered in sweat “mom” he yelled, he looked around the room, in a corner was kitt and wyldfyr, next to them was lance. Artha stared at lance “mom died cuz of you, but still I cant blame her death on you… it toke me forever to get over her death… but still she left something imported to protect…lance no matter what your still my little brother and one day I’ll find dad… one day will be a family again…just wait in till that day” artha laid back down. Lance got up and laid down next to his big brother “artha” he said. “What” said artha looking over to lance. “Did mom have long black hair and light blue eyes?” he asked artha was a little surprised to hear that question. “Yeah why?” lance looked into his brother eye’s “cuz I think I just had a dream of her” lance said hugging onto artha arm. Artha was now shocked “so did I lance, so did I” said artha going back to sleep.

The end…

I know I know it sucks

i have no other writing smiples...

LightningFlash - April 26, 2005 10:28 AM (GMT)
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