Title: Need a little help!
Description: My fic's having problems.
Kereea - October 15, 2005 07:40 PM (GMT)
I don't know how many of you have read my fic, 'Heart of the Dragon', but I'm going to have to go on hiatus because I don't know some things:
-What Tyranus Pax looks like
-If I would be hunted down for attemting to end the Mortis theory, ecven if it's just in my fic
-If the dragon temple should have more rooms than the main one
I'm also having trouble with an ending. After I finish the fic 'Dark Dead End', i'll go back to being stuck, but I have an idea. How many people would like to read the?
-Word Payyn has started a Dragon-Human war, and the world is in chaos. The only hope we have is hiding in the ruins of the destroyed Dragon City. Only one group stands a chance against him-
Okay, basically, it's about what's going on after the war, and the people that are trying to stop him. Happens three years after the show's start. Yes, the canon characters are in it, and in charge.
the Samurox - October 15, 2005 11:42 PM (GMT)
That would be good. I would read it and well I've got writers block so I have to stop work my fan fic scales
Kereea - October 15, 2005 11:55 PM (GMT)
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2539517/1/here's the link.
and if anyone can answer the Q's on my first post, I'd so love it!
The Furox - October 16, 2005 12:12 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Kereea @ Oct 15 2005, 12:40 PM) |
I'm going to have to go on hiatus because I don't know some things: -What Tyranus Pax looks like |
I'm afraid that's one I can't help you with until that episode airs. :)
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| -If I would be hunted down for attemting to end the Mortis theory, ecven if it's just in my fic |
Not by me. As far as I'm concerned, anything is fair game for a fan fiction and they can go in any direction you want. Whether or not a given story idea appeals to me depends on if it's logically consistent with whatever the starting point is and the rules of the world, whether it avoids obvious cliches, and whether the journey through the story is a satisfying one. Beyond that, try anything you want.
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| -If the dragon temple should have more rooms than the main one |
I'd say yes. The whole cavern it's located in looks to be enormous. Lots of room for many different levels and chambers. At the very least, there's the main chamber Mortis usually hangs out in and the training area where the gauntlet things are set up (unless those are supposed to be the same room and the training gear recesses into the floor when not in use, but may as well call them separate chambers).
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How many people would like to read the?
-Word Payyn has started a Dragon-Human war, and the world is in chaos. The only hope we have is hiding in the ruins of the destroyed Dragon City. Only one group stands a chance against him- Okay, basically, it's about what's going on after the war, and the people that are trying to stop him. Happens three years after the show's start. Yes, the canon characters are in it, and in charge. |
Sounds like a good idea! I'd like to read that.
LightningFlash - October 16, 2005 05:39 AM (GMT)
1) Use your imagination, that's what it's for. :)
2) It's your fic. So long as it's plausible and well written, people can't complain.
3) I'd say yeah. Definitely looks that way.
Kereea - January 7, 2006 01:03 AM (GMT)
Okay, since I know you all will murder/main/nag me if I remove this fic, I'll put up an alternative. In it, Kett joins the Dragon Eyes insted, and we go through many misadventures on the crew, not all of which invole thefts, the pairings are cain/Swayy, Vizz/Blarre, and I don't know but I may try a little onesided Beau/Decepshun. So, is that a good idea? beacuse I have no clue what to do with HotD.
Skylii - January 8, 2006 03:39 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Kereea @ Jan 7 2006, 11:03 AM) |
| Okay, since I know you all will murder/main/nag me if I remove this fic, I'll put up an alternative. In it, Kett joins the Dragon Eyes insted, and we go through many misadventures on the crew, not all of which invole thefts, the pairings are cain/Swayy, Vizz/Blarre, and I don't know but I may try a little onesided Beau/Decepshun. So, is that a good idea? beacuse I have no clue what to do with HotD. |
Kett joins the Dragon Eyes instead. Mmm hmm, sounds good.
Cain/Swayy and Vizz/Blarre. *le gasp* Two minds that think alike! *shakes Kereea by shoulders* Quickly, who do you think is smarter, Calvin or Hobbes?! :P
Beau/Decepshun sounds fine, as long as you can handle it good. I don't think they'll all of a sudden fall in love that quickly.
The alternative sounds kind of good, but what is going to happen with HotD? Are you going to ditch it? Redo it? Continue it? If not, don't delete it, because yes, I WILL murder/main/nag if you remove the fic.
I still stay you should try to finish it up, and as best as you can too. It's going in the direction so as it WON'T end up as a lazy ending, such as Moordryd suddenly dies or Word dies or Drakkus suddenly decides to crash down on Dragon City or everybody just got PUNK'D! or whatever, yeah...point is, see if you can still finish it up.
Kereea - January 8, 2006 11:43 AM (GMT)
*mutters "I knew sombody would kill me ofr this...*
O.K., I'm not deleting it! But it will take a long time, I'll say a month or two but no promises, for an update.
The B/D is onesided. Beau likes Decepshun, not the other way around. Okay, I'll be posting 'Disasters of the Dragon Eyes' soon. After the first three chapters, where Kett joins up, the crew goes through multiple disasters, including Swayy's parents, the world's dumbest bank robbery, and chaos on April Fools day.
Skylii - January 8, 2006 08:24 PM (GMT)
Ah, so it's a Parody.
Let the Parody rise once you've finished up HotD.
Hunter - January 8, 2006 08:43 PM (GMT)
ok,im new,can someone tell me what these pictures are for?????
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some people have street racer,some Acadamy,and some Elite Class.do they mean some thing? like is their a game u play and if u get into Acadmy or Elite Class,your pic is upgraded?i have no idea.
Serenity Dragon - January 8, 2006 08:52 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Hunter @ Jan 8 2006, 12:43 PM) |
ok,im new,can someone tell me what these pictures r?
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some people have street racer,some Acadamy,and some Elite Class.do they mean some thing? like is their a game u play and if u get into Acadmy or Elite Class,your pic is upgraded?i have no idea. |
I think those have something to do with the number of posts you have.
The more posts you have contributed, the more advanced you become.
....or something like that.
Hunter - January 8, 2006 08:54 PM (GMT)
thank you!my names Lora.im new here.
Serenity Dragon - January 8, 2006 09:01 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Hunter @ Jan 8 2006, 12:54 PM) |
| thank you!my names Lora.im new here. |
Well welcome to the forum Lora! :lol:
Kereea,
As for that parody, it sounds like a great story. I can't wait to read it!
Kereea - January 9, 2006 12:55 AM (GMT)
Okay, HotD is gonig to take awhile.... just so you all know....
SilverDragon - January 9, 2006 01:01 AM (GMT)
Why not make up T-Paxs appearence? We all know he's supposed to be a blue dragon, and that he'll probably have a knock-out smash-down with Abandonn and other huge dragons, so he would probably be as big. So, he might look a bit like Abandonn except blue without those horns and maybe a bit thinner and more athletic.