Title: The Fake Gold
Co-authors and/or betas: none
Genre/s:
Summary:
Main character/s: Alexander & Darksoul
Pairings:
Rating: not sure...PG 13
Warnings: some death talk anger and hate
Word Count: not sure yet
No. of Chapters: let me think
Complete/WiP:
Concrit: Encouraged/Discouraged/Neutral
Mary Sue: Unsure
Disclaimer:
A/N:



an egg lays between 2 huge rocks an old dragon walks up and truns the egg, the sunlight has come down this far, and the egg will get all it wants. the old dragon lays down next to the brightly colored egg, a tail around it will let her know if it gets to hot. as she sleeps a little Yellow and White dragons runs around making trouble for everyone. yes other dragons a family of yellow bones, and Mix Bones. the little dragon is the only one her age, she was born to late to go with the other youngs ones, but now is to old to wait for the younger ones to go out into the world and find their place. the older dragons snap at her and run off from the nests. she is all too happy going out on her own. a lovly Yellow and Gold dragon walks up and calls to the group, she is the leader of them. the dragon walk up and bow to her, all but the little yellow and white. she runs around jumping over feet and tails, that is untill she gets up to her mother, how snaps her to the ground. the leader is the mother of this little "booger" the yellow and white gets up and bows to her, she then gets up and walks out a thin path. a path she will not be able to get thought in a few more mouths. never to see her home agian the little one looks back and lets out a roar to her family, one of "goodbyes and I love yous" she then runs off, her life is now to begain......Anew.....The Yellow & White Bone dragon Name Roxan........

I can't really read this because of the lack of paragraph breaks or anything resembling grammar, but you should be using the Fanfic Header for your fics. Thanks!

sorry for that {V=V};;

its good so far just watch for small thing like breaks and proper grammer

Ditto. Paragraphs of Doom make my eyes burn.

sorry

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I do wish you good luck with your writing. :)

I know I can....I'm just working on it in Word before I post it up

All right. Edit in the fanfic header when you can, it does need to be there (rating and warnings in case of offending people, disclaimer so the writers know we're doing this in good will).