It didn't have Moordryd in my dream. In his place was Nayade's version of Dorsull. I was on this forum too long that night. I know that its short but so what? Please leave comments.
Scavenger Race
Artha nudged Beau up to the starting gate. “Racers! Today’s race is unlike any race you have participated in before! In this race you will work in teams of six to find six different pieces of gear! The track winds through that giant mansion and out the back door! The first team to find all six pieces of gear wins!” The gates changed color and fell. Artha shot ahead of his teammates, Kitt, Parm, Lance, Moordryd, and Cain. Moordryd slammed Decepshun into Beau and took the lead. “Guys, enough fighting! We gotta find the gear!” The feuding team raced into the mansion and split up. Moordryd raced up to the second level and into one of the many rooms. He easily found the black mind gear. Kitt raced into room on the right of the tracks leading up and found the red thruster gear. Cain and Parm raced into the main room and found black shadow gear and green ramming gear. Artha raced into the kitchen and looked around. There was no gear. He looked through everything and still couldn’t find any. “Dammit. No gear.” He raced out of the room and up the stairs into one of the rooms. He overturned the bed and found white aero gear. Lance looked around the basement and shivered. A rat-drag raced by him. “Where’s the gear?” He looked inside the dryer and found a lot of dust. Lance had Fracshun mag him up to a ventilation shaft and he found the blue balance gear. Lance raced Fracshun outside and stopped by his teammates. “The winners are the Stable Brats and the Dragon Eyes!” “We’re not Stable Brats!” “Just because we worked together in this race does not mean that we’re friends!” They collected their winnings and raced off towards their Compounds.
This is good, though it needs some formatting so it isn't just one giant Paragraph of Doom. Keep it up! :cookie:
^_^ I like it. Moordryd and Artha as teamates. ^_^ Interesting race as well. Great job!
| QUOTE (SilverDragon @ Jan 1 2007, 08:23 PM) |
| so it isn't just one giant Paragraph of Doom. |
Ha ha! Paragraph of Doom! I like that! But seriously, the other fics I plan on posting are in Chapter type form, not one big paragraph.