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Title: My Fanfiction
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Nayade - August 24, 2006 03:49 AM (GMT)
My first fanfiction I ever write! (weee), and it cost me a lot to traduce it, so, it can have a lot of errors :P, sorry. But I want to improve myself, so, I will appreciate a lot to receive commentaries and suggestions. ^^

Title: A New Power
Genre/s: Action
Rating: K
Concrit: Encouraged
Mary Sue: Unsure

Timeline: After "Artha the Drac"


A New Power

Chapter one:

- SILENS!! <Yell a corpulent young man meanwhile he struck the table> we aren’t reaching anything if we are speaking all at the same time!
- All we are worried Phistus <refuted a bothered Pyrrah> Riders and his dragons from each crew had been dissapeiring in the last weeks.
- I know Pyrrah, my crew also sufered that dissapeirings but we don’t know anything about the ones who made this and we don’t have any clue. That’s why this is a propitious moment to cooperate between us.
- To cooperate you say? < Interrupted Moordryd > don’t make me laugh.
- Don’t make you laugh? What I know, your crew is the only one that has not suffered of these strange disappearances and for some reason your crew is always involved in strange events. <Refute Phistus>
- Are you insinuating that I have something to do with this?

Pyrrah interrupted both young men arguing that they have to do something to reveal the kidnappers. They began to obtain some deductions; some blamed to Word and in passing to Moordryd, others on the other hand, remembered the legend of the dangeurous orange dragons.

Some months ago the disappearances began to increase drastically and curiously it disappeared as much the dragons as their riders, it seemed not to have a favorite type of victim. Phistus wanted the attention of all; he considered this an opportunity to propose them to join with the Dragon Booster to stop the increase of kidnappings.
- You really think that to join with him we will be able to improve the situation? If I’m not wrong, the Dragon Booster doesn’t have been avoiding the disappearances. <Said Moordryd>
- We must be joined, thus our efforts to protect ours will be not dispersed. <Phistus raised his voice >
- What ever, my crew dosen’t need neither the help of a fool like the Dragon Booster nor either of a pathetic group of scared riders. <Exclaimed Moordryd with arrogance>
- What did you say? < Said a furious Phistus >
- We, The Dragon Eyes, we take care of ourselves and we don’t need anybody. < And said this, Moordryd and his companion, Cain and Swayy, retired from the center>

Moordryd still has in his mind what Phistus said to him, he couldn’t deny that his own crew was always involved in events that his father, Word Paynn, make them to do. For a moment he remembered all the things that his father had demanded to him to do and he felt resentment. But this time his father didn’t have anything to do with this, although he could not be so sure. His father already had acted behinds his back, like when he aired Vociferous to capture Beau; this time could be the same thing.

Meanwhile the Penn’s crew met with Mortis in the Temple of the Dragon, something important he had to say to Artha.

- Within a week, there will be a new competition Artha, known as The Nacre Track. <Mortis said with the same solemnity that characterizes him> This competition it will be in the Mountain of Jabar, twentyfive miles from Dragon City. This competition is very special and happens not very often, since it depends on how much has snowed in the zone. There have been years in which it hasn’t been possible to make it and the competitors can only hope to have more luck the next year.
- And this year the conditions are perfect. I was waiting two years to return to this competition <said Kitt very excited>
- <The Dragon priest agreed and continuous > You will have to use the Sledding Gear and the Heat Armor Gear. In addition you will have to buy clothes adapted for that climate and you have to use this helmet <he said to him while it gives a helmet to him with a design very similar to which Artha already had, but it covered all his face>
- I used the Sledding Gear once, but the Heat Armor Gear, what do that gear?
-WHAT, you don’t know what is it? <Exclaim Parmon with surprise> You surprises me Artha, you must know, you are a dragon rider.
- Well, I don’t know, Ok? I have never use it before.
- You have to be informated <said Kitt> that gear exists from long ago. Although all the dragons have a very heavy skin, in very cold climates, like the Mountain of Jabar, they lose heat very quickly and the Heat Armor Gear allows your dragon to maintain his temperature.
- The competition will be within four days, you will have to prepare everything and to go the day previous of the competition <said the enigmatic dragon priest>
- Wait... What will happen if I go and the city needs the Dragon Booster!
- It will be only two days or at last three days, I don’t believe that during that time the Dragon Booster will be needed. <Said Parmon>
-I think that too. It is an important competition Artha, that you can’t miss; it will help you as training and it will give you a great amount of points that will help you to get to the next level. <Said Mortis>

He continued talking with the four, but this time was on the same subject that worried to the Council of Twelve. The number of stolen dragons had increased considerably and, in addition, their owners also disappeared with them. They were deliberating on the possible actors, it were the sufficient reasons to blame to Word, it was already known that he was turning dragons into wraith and that he was trying to turn humans into wraith too, and on the other hand, it could be Propheci; with his attempt to control humans. Even so, Mortis seemed to have another suspicion but he didn’t dare to pronounce it, hoped that it was just his idea.

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Thanks LightningFlash for repair my mistake so fast, your the best!^^

Shearkin - August 28, 2006 08:37 PM (GMT)
well verry good verry good indeed !! I can't weight to see what hppen's in the next chapter's...( where are the dragon's and ridder's going?)
~Shearkin




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