Title: The New Brother
Pursoot - August 23, 2006 10:17 PM (GMT)
Chapter One
The hospitals in Mid-city were full of people and sounds. Many of them were new to Artha. Everthing was white and grey with pictures hanging on the walls. Nurses and doctors walked back and forth holding clipboards and papers in their hands.
His black hair moved vack and forth as he walked along with his father with a Vidd game at his side. Nothing seemed to Escape his Blue eyes as he looked around, puzzled but amazed. His clothes were simple, Blue pants with a Red shortsleeve top. Artha turned his head at his father and asked "What are we doing here Dad? Where's Mom?"
Connor stopped walking and looked back at Atrha with a smile on his face. He bent his knees downand and said " Artha, you are getting a new brother today. Mom is in a special room and we are going to meet her."
Connor stood back up with Artha at his side. Artha's mind was full of questions, none of them he dared to ask. He kept walking unti Connor stopped and turned to his right. A door with the number 524 on it was in front of him, He turned the door knob and stepped in. The room was large and slightly crowded. a bed was in the middle with machines around it. There were two cots beside it with sheets and pillows. An elevated television was up on a dresser beside the bathroom. The walls were painted a light brown with pictures of a forest.
Artha stepped in amazed. He had never seen a room quite like this. It was not like his house at all. He stepped in and walked around the room. Connor's smile faded as he turned around to a nurse.
Atrha jumped on the cot immeaditley turning his Vidd game on to play battle ground dragon. After a minute of talking Connor walked back into the room and said "Artha, This nice nuse is going to take you to a room with other children while I go check on Mom."
Atrha turned his head and paused the Vidd game. "Why can't I come with you?" he asked hoping for an answer, but Connor left before he could say a thing. He turned off the Vidd game with a sad face, and jumped off the cot. He walked over to a nurse with blonde hair and bright blue eyes. She took his his and closed the door as they exited the room and walked down the hall.
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R&R people!
phsycopathicdragon - August 23, 2006 10:58 PM (GMT)
Hmm, what's gonna happen next?
Continue, it's good, wanna see what's next!
Airshadow - August 24, 2006 01:43 AM (GMT)
NICEE!"!!
I REALLY want to know hat whappe next :D:D:D:D :*: :*: :*: :*: :*:
Nayade - August 24, 2006 02:50 AM (GMT)
This is very good, I really want to know what will happen. :)
arrow - August 25, 2006 06:42 PM (GMT)
this is pretty good
is cot supposed to be a coach or something?
can't wait for the next chapter!
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Pursoot - August 25, 2006 09:00 PM (GMT)
A cot is one of those beds that you can roll in and out of rooms. You see them in hospitals and Hotels too. I wouldn't say this was my best chapter, but I'll post the second one soon.
Airshadow - August 27, 2006 07:12 PM (GMT)
Please post the next chapter soon, I jsut caqn't wait what happens next :D
Pursoot - August 30, 2006 09:22 PM (GMT)
Chapter Two
Artha quickly took his hand out of hers. He wouldn't give up so easily on seeing His mother. The nurse walked over to a desk and Artha darted off down the halls.
He ran past people and more people hoping to find his parents. He missed a wet floor sign and ran into it sliding down the hallway. As he came to a stop, Every glared at him. All he could do was sit or run. Artha sighed as he looked down and back up.
Without any intentions he turned his head down the halway and started running again hoping to lose them. He soon came to a dead end, but found shelter in an elevator. He pressed the button and waited for the it to come.
The red light flashed and a short ringing noise sounded. Suprisingly, no one was in the elevator, so he stepped inside. His face filled with gloom and boredom as he turned around. "Let's see. How do I work this thing." Artha said in his childish voice. "I think dad pushed a glowing square thing."
Artha reached up to one up high, and pressed it. The elevator doors closed and Artha waited. The elevator made a large buzzing sound and Artha stood back in fear, covering his face. He turned to see it had stopped. Artha started pressing more until the whole thing was full of light.
The elevator moved up and the door opened. They closed and started again. This pattern continued over and over again. Then when the doors opened for the last time, Artha saw nothing but a blurr. His breath was knocked out of him, and he fell backwards, unconcious.