I like them all but I can only use one

Please vote and reply

It would be easier to make a suggestion if I knew the gist of your story. Could you describe it a bit (without giving away the ending, of course)?

In any event, welcome to the forum. :)

Pacing upon the metal wall her claws clanking on the metallic surface she turns her head at the sun with a hateful look. "Why must you return," Zulay mutters to her self glaring at the rising sun, "Why, if you submit to the moon every night?" She knew that she to must submit to the sun and turn back in to Decepshun, the dragon she was reborn as, and return to the stables. Finally when the dawn had broken the frost melted from her light blue skin and began to transform. Once she completed her transformation as the dragon and fled from the sun to the dragon eye stables.


At night she is Zulay but in a Human/Dragon form, covered in frost, her lower half is dragon and the upper half is human, and is wearing a blue silk kimono(some kind of japanese dress)
At day she is just Decepshun

Ok?

and thank you for the welcom

Gee, that sounds an awful lot like Zulay's Return by Ninja Dragon decepshun!

sorry i wanted to do my version if it I will do a different one *bows in respect*


how about this?

On the exact moment of her death Zulay's soul bonds with Moordryd. As he grew he began to notice that he possessed ghostly powers. At the age of thirteen his father started to sense his strange gift. "What is happening father?" Moordryd asked his father trying to not slip through the floor.

"What happening is that some how you have is some kind of ghost-like powers Moordryd"

"Ghost-like Powers?"

.......uh...that sounds a bit like Danny Phantom......ono offense....

Here are a few title suggestions for what they're worth: :)

If you decide to go with a were-dragon type of story, "Eyes of a Dragon" sounds like a good title. Another good one might be something like "By the Light of the Moon" or some such variation.

If you go with the ghost aspect, maybe something like "The Spirit Within" or something along those lines. :poof:

Hope that helps a little.

I know that sounds like Danny phantom but the reason for the sudden fan fic change is decepshun, who use to go to my school, gave me a tip for what fan fic I can write and she helped me to do it because I am no good at stories and now LightningFlash thinks I am her!

And thank you for the help now I know the title for my fan fic

(No offense taken)

...And the story just gets more and more complicated. Honestly, Decepshun, can't you be subtle about it? First Ninja pm-ed you (I so bet that pm was never actually sent), now she goes to your school as well. I guess it's also coincidence that your email addresses are from the same domain, right?

i know that our e-mail has a different name but same ending ok that was because we use to be friends ok and the story Zulay's return was her's *sigh* look she is really shy and once she thinks she is making a bad reputation she tries to hide her self so she kept making different accounts then the board or so she said

Well, "she'd" do a lot better if you...I mean, "she", at least did a proper job of establishing a new membership rather than picking up where "she" left off. Or simply ASKED to change your name and/or recognise and admit to any mistakes rather than disobeying the rules.

I'm afraid I don't believe that you're separate people any more than I believe in the Easter Bunny: she goes off, you come on shortly afterwards, similar email addresses, similar fanfics, similar syntax. It even looks like the character in your signature is the one Decepshun had photoshopped into Moordryd. I'll believe in innocent coincidence and offer due apologies when I see proof, Ninja.

I am not decepshun! she taught me how to write fan fics, we are both moordryd lovers, we wanted similar e-mail addresses because we were friends, I know the girl and now I wish I never started this subject, the end!!!!!! (sorry i get really offended when people blame me for others screw ups, call me a liar when i tell the truth, and think i was the one who did it, etc)*sniff*