Title: Drabble Feedback
Description: What it says on the title.
Sarah Frost - October 30, 2005 12:13 PM (GMT)
For
the posted drabbles (http://s10.invisionfree.com/Ace_Lightning/index.php?showtopic=255), so as not to clutter it up.
The Drabble Challenges thread is located
here (http://s10.invisionfree.com/Ace_Lightning/index.php?showtopic=254).
Scarab, I love your Rick/Heather one. A highly amusing way of pulling off a near-impossible pairing. :)
Scarab Dynasty - October 30, 2005 12:15 PM (GMT)
Thanks Sarah :)
In response to the aliens - i've seen this one several times. In fact I believe it was the first of your drabbles I saw on the old board. Tis very nice. I love the setting. Not sure where her clothes went,though...
Hippy ace - *snorts with laughter* damnit, he's so cute! *huggles ace* Loving it!
Scarab Dynasty - October 30, 2005 01:01 PM (GMT)
Sarah - icecream - ...HOW did you do that? She pulled off the icecream an the femslash! (Though I have LI down as a mint person, myself :P) nice one.
LightningFlash - October 30, 2005 10:58 PM (GMT)
I'm a mint person. :P
Nice work, girls. :)
Scarab Dynasty - October 30, 2005 11:13 PM (GMT)
Fool! Three flavour chocolate with fudge sauce is the way to go :P
(Thank you :))
Scarab Dynasty - October 30, 2005 11:53 PM (GMT)
Fireworks (Sarah) - can I say LOVING IT, pelase?
Sarah Frost - October 30, 2005 11:55 PM (GMT)
Scarab Dynasty - October 31, 2005 11:23 AM (GMT)
Drabble (Hyperpsychomaniac) : Your grage door fic made me laugh out loud - nice to see a human theme in the work :D
Sarah Frost - October 31, 2005 04:59 PM (GMT)
Ooooh, yes, H--I like your drabble very much. Congrats on not putting too much Random into it. ;) You went with a pretty original idea, too.
LightningFlash - November 1, 2005 09:55 AM (GMT)
Dun dun dun dun . . . .
That was supposed to be scary music. ;) :P
Poor Mark will be scarred for life, you know. Forever suspicious, on edge. >D
Nice. You are forgiven. By me, at least.
hyperpsychomaniac - November 1, 2005 10:47 AM (GMT)
Nice Halloween fic, Sarah. :D You got Mark down good. Really enjoyed that.
Scarab Dynasty - November 1, 2005 04:17 PM (GMT)
What H said :P loved it, Sarah.. and you didn't freak me too much this time.
Sarah Frost - November 1, 2005 07:43 PM (GMT)
Oooh. Scarab. I just read it twice. Loved it. I really enjoy post-apocalyptic scenarios or anything approaching sorcery, or anything with competent!Fear and LI, and this was beautifully done. :D It was well-written, of course, and really interesting.
Sarah Frost - November 1, 2005 10:26 PM (GMT)
Wonderful, Scarab. Great use of an OC--and a quasi-Sue ;) . Very nice, and I rather liked the way you handled the 'brush' part of the challenge.
Scarab Dynasty - November 1, 2005 10:33 PM (GMT)
Sarah Frost - November 2, 2005 04:15 AM (GMT)
Sibyll's OC. :P As Kilobyte is to Rick.
Scarab Dynasty - November 2, 2005 12:30 PM (GMT)
Oh good, that's a relief for a moment there I thought I'd created a Sue :P
Rotgut - November 2, 2005 05:21 PM (GMT)
You are very good at writing dribble. I mean drabble! :P
Scarab Dynasty - November 2, 2005 08:49 PM (GMT)
I'm not sure whether to be affronted by that :P thanks if not.
Scarab Dynasty - November 3, 2005 10:31 AM (GMT)
Sarah: Once again you have proved why Li would never make a Knight - I love it :D
Scarab Dynasty - November 3, 2005 10:31 AM (GMT)
Sarah: Once again you have proved why Li would never make a Knight - I love it :D
Sarah Frost - November 3, 2005 10:34 AM (GMT)
Nope, you're right--she's not the type. (Unless she's both retired and really bored. ;) )
Scarab Dynasty - November 4, 2005 12:08 AM (GMT)
from the looks of it the Knight business makes her even more jaded though... :P
Scarab Dynasty - November 4, 2005 12:14 AM (GMT)
I like it. I love the way it’s written – and the use of runes is something of interest, I always thought. You’re very capable at describing them but then you know that J enjoyable. Fun. I love. :D
Sarah Frost - November 4, 2005 09:13 PM (GMT)
Wow, excellent fic, Scarab. :) I love the apocalypse aspect of it. The ending was rather sudden, but it was long enough, eh? :P
Scarab Dynasty - November 4, 2005 09:14 PM (GMT)
I ran out of steam... the significance of the word "drable" just seems to fly right over the heads around here :P
Scarab Dynasty - November 4, 2005 09:49 PM (GMT)
Sarah (why is it always us?) :unsure:
Titanic fic - *snigger* I like that :D and well done on keeping it close to the "drabble! limit.
Sarah Frost - November 5, 2005 02:24 AM (GMT)
Macbeth: Oooh. Chilling. Something that didn't happen in canon, and something that needed a little more explanation as to the apparent mind control. Well written and not quite what I was expecting. :)
LightningFlash - November 5, 2005 10:20 AM (GMT)
:D :D :D :D :D*mouth splits*
Oh, Sarah! That's brilliant! It was totally Kellamy, right?
:D
Sarah Frost - November 5, 2005 10:27 AM (GMT)
Yes. :P (Yay for non-traditional gender identities.)
Scarab Dynasty - November 5, 2005 12:37 PM (GMT)
Indeed - that was great story Sarah and nice OC use :D
Scarab Dynasty - November 26, 2005 10:32 PM (GMT)
Why are my comments always to sarah here? :P
Lovely fic, Sarah. Could easily be extended, I think. Oh, and the pet spider - lovely touch. :D
Scarab Dynasty - November 30, 2005 10:56 PM (GMT)
Sarah: This is NOT your best?:P And you wonder why I'm scared of your best?
Brilliant :D and nice use of the quote there. The only thing I'm cocnerned about is the "Lightning Knights don't kill" point, because I'm fairy sure wiping evils out counts as killing and Ace has done that frequently.
Sarah Frost - November 30, 2005 10:58 PM (GMT)
Well, they seem able to return--even Googler--so I'm not sure that counts as killing. But yeah, I see room for a "we GENERALLY imprison but kill when necessary" interpretation there.
LightningFlash - December 1, 2005 05:42 AM (GMT)
Lovely. :)
Just one thing I'm wondering, was Rick the crazy guy, or did Chuck become one?
Scarab Dynasty - December 1, 2005 11:05 AM (GMT)
Could be both. In fact could be any mortal :) I like that. Vagueness is good.
Sarah Frost - December 5, 2005 09:00 PM (GMT)
Oooh, chilling, Scarab. I thought it was two drabbles at first for some reason, with the Random bit seeming almost "tacked-on" to the end, but interesting. :)
Scarab Dynasty - December 5, 2005 10:41 PM (GMT)
Thanks :) Yeah I see what you mean, I think Random's bit would have worked better as the beginning of another fic, it certainly sounds like a beginning, but hey... this whole drabble sounds like the beginning of SOMETHING...
Oh...
I think I just found the start and a nice little chunk of CtL... :D
Sarah Frost - December 10, 2005 02:46 AM (GMT)
Scarab--great drabble! :D I really think it works well.
LightningFlash - December 10, 2005 07:46 AM (GMT)
Scarab, I LOVE the Chuck on Sparx one (or is that Sparx on Chuck? :P ), so cute. :P